Black Poetry : TIGHT BLACK SUIT!

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIGHT BLACK SUIT



    I wake up early
    I glance out of the window
    The night is still
    I’m thinking if I move quickly enough
    I can blend in with the shadows of darkness
    I rush to get ready
    Ignoring the light
    Dodging the mirrors view
    Preparing my soul for the emotional reflection of this black suit.

    I’m thinking I should change my speech according to the company I keep
    Or maybe if I changed the color of my eyes
    Would I lose my identity? Would I be spiritually sued?
    Will they notice I’m wearing the same black suit?

    DAM!****, I go to’ have a plan
    Maybe I’ll learn all I can before the night turns to day
    My yearn for respect is in demand
    Cause they’re my biggest fans anyway
    Maybe I should just remain silent and nod my head and smile silently

    Well, it’s almost day
    And there are no bushes for camouflage
    No where to hide, no light bright enough to blind ‘em
    So I’ll just have to wear this black suit
    And I’ll wear it with pride, even if I get burned
    For this black suit cannot be returned
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes sometimes
    We try and cover ourselves
    To hide ourselves
    Nice flow poet
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you Tantrum:kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true dat often we go
    into da shadows with
    darkness to cover in
    da blackest
    i really enjoyed this suit drop
     
  5. mahdi_el

    mahdi_el New Member MEMBER

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    very good sis

    just wanted to say that was very good...since u can write like this, then y on earth do u need a man who watches poop porn???...lol
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thanks Rich and mahdi_l thanks brother but man did you put me on blast or what!:garbage:
     
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    enjoyed the flow flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you nevar girl:kiss1:
     
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