Black Poetry : Tied Up...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jan 23, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just getting caught up in your lines,
    Becoming intertwined,
    Like a vine,
    With thoughts of these words,
    Thinking of them being whispered in my ear,
    Piercing my lonely atmosphere,
    But then...your words come to an end.
    Which is why I had to read them again.

    My eyes are windows to my soul,
    And as I take in and behold,
    Your passionate intentions,
    Which you do not hesitate to mention,
    In your floetry,
    I take them home with me.

    They play in my mind,
    Time and time again.
    Then the process begins,
    As they are analyzed, criticized,
    Scrutinized…
    I become mesmerized, hypnotized,
    As I realize that my windows are opened,
    My eyes, and my heart,
    And they are loving and hanging on,
    To your every word.



     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my my my !!!!
    wordz of caressness
    a solo confess
    dis was too tyte
    bringing it to da light

    for a min i thought it was me .....lol
    flow on express ya self i love this here
    it captured me within
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beautiful way to be tied up.

    I enjoy your gift... thanks :)



    flo'wit'it!
    Coco :heart:
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes i also get caught up in poetry
    very nice poem
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poems like this get us all wrapped up, and for good reason...flow on.
     
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