Black Poetry : Thy Name is Seduction

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  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thy Name is Seduction

    Baby, your mama should have named you Seduction
    Cuz that’s exactly what you do to me
    Making love to my mind over and over
    As time flows so sweetly with no interruption

    With just a glance in my direction,
    You have to the power to make my knees go weak
    As your eyes slowly rove over my body
    Touching me intimately from my head to my feet

    Nothing has to be said from you to me
    Because our souls already know the words
    They’ve had this conversation before
    Some place between the present and eternity

    Ohh, Seduction
    My body tingles at the very mention of your name
    I can smile at you from across the room
    Only we know the rules to our lovers’ game

    Your smile, mmmm
    Has the power to set my very skin on fire
    Making my insides burn and yearn
    For just a minute of your warm desire

    Your body, a temple…
    As beautiful as the Motherland
    God made you in His image
    From the richest, blackest sand

    Our bodies, yours and mine
    Were made specifically for each other
    The Ying to my Yang
    That was God’s great design

    My sweet, sweet Seduction
    You don’t understand
    I’m consumed with your scent, your touch, your pure manliness
    And a need for you to touch me the way only you can

    But of all that doesn’t even matter
    Because when night turns to dawn
    My dreams of you are over
    I wake up and you’re gone

    © April D. Nickerson
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow...i followed this one all the way thru....he truly must be a special man...a god, for you to bestow such adoration....

    a great write...i like the rhythm of the stanzas....you just bubble this one..
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey there Napturally...again welcome aboard:roll:
    I like the piece you dropped on us...keep flowing..we hear ya, ...^5
     
  4. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll for reading and keeping me encouraged!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Napturally,
    Nice drop my sista

    Ohh, Seduction
    My body tingles at the very mention of your name
    I can smile at you from across the room
    Only we know the rules to our lovers’ game


    Im so feeln' this, keepm' comin'
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's apparent that this brotha has left footprints on your mind. This flowed very well.
     
  7. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Very sweet and seductive:) Nice flow Napture:) Keep up the good work.

    Much Love

    AM
     
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