Black Poetry : Thy Child

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What about da children
    the one's who enter
    life unknown and left
    on the river bank of reasons
    unto thy mother of comfort
    her warmth of soul and feed
    the gallary of love and unto
    thy father of manly wisdom
    working to give the light from
    darkness of entering
    thy world of struggle
    what about thy children
    son of son's of father's father
    daughter of mother's mother
    of great knowledge to seek
    and learn the treasures of
    of past history what about them
    who carried our exsistance into
    today from the yesteryears
    thy child
    stand alone in tears weeping
    from the pain and depth of thy
    father & mother struggle and
    upon thy table a piece of bread
    a fish and cup of water to feed
    millions from hunger and thirst
    da acts of GOD thy Holy Father
    what about thy children
    who lost way , set upon street
    play and fulfill a fantasy dream
    of wealth from da destructional
    myth of today these children is
    or babies of high hope and
    future kingz & Queenz of honor
    save me a far cry !
    save me before they all go deep
    under water swim child swim :swim:
    before da last leg laying up in a bed :injured:
    :hearthis:
    Da Speaker of growth & unity
    what about da children!?
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Save the children!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if we start now we can save lives and hope to a better growth
    and kill some of this struggle .......our children are rare gems
    we all been a gem some now a jewel save the babies now !!!
    thankz brutha
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed the childern.. you know i love when you flow like this
    very true and deep write.....let that mental take off poet
    this was a awesome scribe wit a powerful meaning!!!!!

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel .....we have to know our children are targets in today world
    we are the found protectors to bring them out of da shadows of our struggles
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could hear yolonda adams sangin in the background my brotha :) the children are ours to protect :)
     
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    Suffer not the children.

    Nice piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They are diamonds in the rough deserving a chance to shine. If you lend a hand to a child often enough, hopefully the child will learn that this is as it should be, to help those in need when we can. Deeply flowed brotha.
     
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    true dat thankz triniti they are gems to da world

    thankz positivemindset we have to save these babies from our deep struggle

    thankz watz tru dat sis.. we are the first line for them and to teach them
    the out way from deep struggle and end a 400 plus year thing they are
    rare jewels we all was at birth now we can make the different
     
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    ANother ALL STAR DROP, RICH$$$$
    Diggin this peice
     
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