Black Poetry : THUG LIFE pt.III

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  1. $$RICH$$

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    Thuggish life chicks on the side
    pulling them in wit silly pride
    placing them in danger like it a ride
    fast for this cash just won't last
    momma baby on da street
    under the love of thugs beat
    nightly there insoul weep to be free
    shackled in the web of defeat
    corrupted corruption of lavish life
    won't ever never be a real man's wife

    Trying to be hard like a man
    calling shots til they ring out
    destructional metal enslaved
    freedom heart crave
    as i watch her from da window
    of my mind and the vision of edge
    where my soul pledge for her safety

    lost in his rapture of caddy & threads
    but ya life to him is only in bed
    chicks on da streets lost there worth
    to a thug ya just another skirt
    as these thugs creep not knowing if
    tonight is the last as gun shots smash
    and crash ya home child in da room
    nowhere to broom i cry in her savor
    from displeasure but yet chance life
    with extreme meassure how can it be
    when our ancestors was rape and beat
    gave in to the white meat so we be free
    birth after birth people vs people
    sistas calling sistas out trying to
    scream and shout of hate lost in this
    mental slave trout i cry in tears of fear

    see thugs kill ya soul
    replace it with dope and gold
    thugs don't respect a woman worth
    but confuse them under there curse
    can't comfort hold no truth jus loyal
    to the man of the street
    see we have thug women in da world
    on T.V some rap devil crap some sell
    many in jail but it's bigge then that

    her worth is more then diamond & gold
    she is no sorry cheap A%& u know
    a sista worrior queen just lost in da
    bling bling ring of thug life & dreams
    entrapment for some love coz others
    cast her out bruthas looked at her clout
    but my heart won't turn away til i know
    she safe every day taken back the
    black race in this madness and disgrace
    free ya mind then ya soul let ya heart
    be the treasure to stroll coz thuggish
    become hugs and from hugs become a
    bond united with loveone's a thug like
    a destroyer so ladies let me dip u in
    river jordan and prasie in ya name
    save da worth of womanly sane
    know ya honor and due respect from
    this thuggish cat , no tyme to mix get
    all wet purrr flipping da kat just seek
    sistahood quiet as it kept bond the
    true chain add to the links and give up
    these stupid streets coz thug life
    will hang u to dry on the line of enslavement
    and struggling days even send u to a early
    Grave

    Inside this window of faith is a place call
    sista hood an hope try it i tell you no joke
    stroke ya mental use ya brain don't become
    another stain splash on the street under the
    thug life stupid beat be what our ancestors
    lone for thee and that a woman a queen a
    mother free from oppression inner slavery
    stressin on as i weep from this thuggish tree
    trying t save u and me from thug life...........


    Quote:: No not my troubles yet feel my heart & pain
    of life mental enslavery stain of black confused brains
    still in bondage walking struggling in these chains lost
    unity of Afro-african-americans united way i weep!
    :(

    Dyamond Nu~wave creation of life
    production 2005 AllRights Reserved
    $R
     
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    this was deep and powerful brought tears t my eyes...now this is true black souls of poetry crying out, loving this flow loving all 3 parts. My brother your pen is awesome you delievered this right here.....Angel
     
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    Didn't know you'd bring part three this way...wow. Thuggish women, hard like men on the one hand, pathetic and used up like a piece of meat on the other. This plea was laid out plain for all to see. Loved the way you brought the vibe brotha.
     
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    Thuggish women R women only by sex,
    But they R more like dudes according 2 what dwells above their necks,
    Cuz they try 2 check quick if they feel disrespected,
    Steppin' in dudes faces & actin' like they've got big muscles & erect d!cks.
    But their chicks.

    That's the image that Thug Life portrays
    & we lose more of our people 2 it every single day.
    Even the white cats in suburbs is gettin' carried away.
    Thinkin' that the thug life that many live is not truly a dangerous game.
    Thanks Hip-Hop.(****)

    Nice piece bruh, it just keeps gettin better...or worse...
     
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    Thankz Angel ......it's da window of life i see thugs & thuggish
    even foolish mixture enslaved in the system of society mental
    trap our people struggle is heavier then da yesteryears today

    Thankz watz......our Queenz have given the crown away feeling
    free but when u bounce and lay sway here & there wit no care
    u still enslaved to a system built to kill ya mind in corruption.

    positivemindset Thankz tyte drop u felt it and on point we need to
    awaken our people from this deep sleep and ware the crown that was
    passed from way back we must find our united way back and unify

    unity is our biggest power our entrapment mental enslavery brings
    tears and pain keep us struggling deeper then before , thuggish fame
    always point back wit fingers to blame how shame my spirit ball up
    and hide in my soul yet fear the lost in numbers daily from da street
    life thuggish style.
    Peace be still family as i seek hope from da window of life we live
    as people in america
     
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    in life which we live
    through mental illness
    of greed and destructional
    pain we send mix messages
    yet can't claim the crown
    til we define our true inner
    beings and worth as people
    from society system da hurts
    and destroy dreams using
    bruthas & sistas of thug life

    str8 thuggish ain't no charm
    just mentally harm ............
     
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    just lost in the mental destruction
    no unity i watch from the window
    how we take each other down
    like a wall .....seeking a breakthrough
     
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    dang rich......whoa....
    those words written
    spoke volumes
    if only those lost
    could hear them
    spitting truth so storng
    ready to kill folks
    if only those lost could hear it tho.....
     
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    thankz daroc it's reality truth and still being hunted by it all
    time we become the hunter and free da minds from mental
    corruption and thuggish wayz of life.

    peace be still as i continue this answer journey in Nu~wave
     
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    sometime one can't free self
    just caught up in the fast thug life
    sad.
     
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