Black Poetry : THUG LIFE pt.I

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Life like an open window
    minds become a battle ground
    of reperation & emotions
    where love is pitted between
    common knowledge and root
    of simple sense of life

    Street hood gansta
    thuggish mob to gain power
    under false nation of followers
    where honsety has been taken
    hostage under motivation
    bruthas become beauty & beast
    ramshacked on illusional humanity

    sour notes pour on da streets
    call death angel and brown bomber
    liquidated from man to child
    taken under da spell of destruction
    corner to corner , city to city
    my life become a maze from my eyes
    i see through this window image
    watching black souls in defeat from
    one name to the next man against man
    brutha hood worriors vs Thug life

    Bling" bling" diamonds and gold
    platium sold , bodies roll from
    a controller face ware no darkness
    sheild behind fatherless mental confussion
    seeking love in da streets of thuggish mush
    beauty of man is loyality and honor
    beast of man his gun
    beauty of man one that hunts
    beast is the hunter to endanger
    thugs now on lables
    u see them on cable
    I picture in my mind how slavery still live
    how the struggle has become heavier
    inside thug life .

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  2. daroc

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    "I picture in my mind how slavery still live
    how the struggle has become heavier
    inside thug life ."

    this poem hit the spot. that last part is so true. u stay hittin us wit them tight ones- continue on....
     
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    Um, this is much deep. I like how you compared slavery to a thug's life. That was madd deep. I liked this. Your props are definitely deserved. :welldone:
     
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    Daroc...........it's deeper then we know and the maze is cloudy full of trapment
    for our people of color pt.2 next

    Krazelyricks...... through this window of thug life is no freedom but captivity to
    our people today

    I truely thank u both for feeling a depression that kills our hopes & dreams
    from the mental minds of corruption and corrupted weakness it's bigger then
    we know as we live in the battle zones of America .....peace!
     
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    Whoa!!!!!!!! This is incredible, $$RICH$$. All the way through, from top to bottom, and so on point. That last stanza also got me too. Wow.
     
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    thankz gempis ......the life our bruthas living inside the thuggish style
    has continue to weaken into the society fixing from da mark man ......
    stay tune for pt.2
     
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    Those last lines do bring your point home, I agree. But the whole piece, the concept, will we ever break the chains that shackle us? Will it always be one type of slavery or another? Enslaved by the white man, by our minds, by each other? Much to ponder in this. Props my brotha, do flow on....
     
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    My sista watz enslavement of the mental minds is a task to uncover
    and free the minds when we have so many thugs living from man
    inflicked power or da hard core drugs given to destroy us as people
    singing the blues in this black on black race our struggle continues
    Thankz for coming inside thug life on da streets.......Peace within !
     
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    this was different...and i like the contrasting...well written piece
     
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    man this wuz krazy...bein the quiet n considerate type thug i am lol....this really caught my attention...big ups on this drop here...i enjoy readin ur posts

    1 Luv
     
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