Black Poetry : Thug In The Club

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thug In The Club

    A thug in the club looking for love couldn’t just rub
    A girl’s thighs and ask for the pies in front of her friends cuss
    Can’t win then she’ll turn you down and be concern about
    A clown, sip Henny alert to grip a mini-skirt wrong route
    But this is what his dome be bout he’s not a sick boy but
    Lick and enjoy the fruity juices in cutie’s coochees word up
    Anyway had to purchase a club card just to thug hard he’s
    Not above god but not a scrub or retard that’s the way he be
    “Waitress needs a drink to proceed stink on the funk of this club”
    Her hips were brown and round she served him a Royal Crown “here thug”
    “Waitress it’s a corrupt situation club not constructed for the habitation of scrubs”
    “Yeah I agree Gee the microphone is dome-shaped and some roam fake
    At home bake wrong flavor brought on by the neighbor an unknown take
    The game out of proportion get a girl pregnant lame needs an abortion quick
    That a bitter taste considered a waste not glittered in our race it’s kind of sick”
    “Boo I like your hair shine what you do in your spare time?” “Oh I read
    Books need to look for better job forever involved with progress to proceed
    In the right direction on a flight of resurrection, also like to write and bend
    Verses with words into curves by using verbs and abusing herds of listeners, to begin
    My nerves are steal so my grammar seem to hammer and settle nice
    Like a metal device screwed down in this mamma gamma got pebbled ice
    These are rocks of diamonds go with a guy on the block name Salmon”
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow Madd. Where is that waitress at with my drink.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed tyte drop da MC MADD in da house
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte drop..like it alot :angel1:
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all whom responde i just be trying to rock it yo
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD, you flip the verses like a stone cold pro.

    Makes me wanna hear it with beats.

    Peace.
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset thanks for the props for real yo
     
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