Black Poetry : Thru The Eyez Of A Lookin Glass...

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  1. NICELOCKS820

    NICELOCKS820 Member MEMBER

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    THRU THE EYEZ OF A LOOKIN GLASS....

    I SEE THINGS THRU THE EYEZ OF A LOOKING GLASS AND
    MY VISION SHALL SURPASS
    THE SUPERFICIAL.
    CUZ LOOKING UNDER THE SKIN THAT HOLDS PAST **** WITHIN,
    I BEGIN
    TO HAVE A VISION
    OF WOMYN
    FIGHTIN A ***** NAMED SYN.
    BORN BY HYPOCRISY,
    IT WAS ACTUALLY MEANT FOR WE,
    TO INCLUDE THE UNION OF SPIRITUALITY,
    WITH OUR WOMANHOOD.
    MISUNDERSTOOD
    TO BE BLACK SHEEP THAT WE NEVA WAS...
    BLINDED BY TIME BECAUSE..
    OF CONSTANT LIFE IN REWIND.
    SO, HOW MANY LOVERS LIPS WILL FIND THE TIME TO KISS,
    THE BRUISED SHOULDERS AND HIPS,
    WHERE HUGE FISTS HIT
    AND FEET KICK LIKE A DRUM SNARE.
    MUST I PREPARE TO WOO YOU
    WITH MY BLACK MAGIC JU JU?
    OR SHOULD I RELAX WITH A SPIRIT BLUE
    AND CONTEMPLATE ON ELEVATIN U?
    AS A DIVINE CREATION I CRY OUT TO MOTHER EARTH TO MANIFEST MY REBIRTH......,VALIDATE MY EMANCIPATION....
    OPEN MY FATE AND
    REMOVE ANY HATE THAT MAY CROSS MY PRESENT SITUATION...
    CUZ BEATING TO THE TUNE OF MY OWN DRUM, I, RESIST THE CONSTANT DRONE AND HUM OF
    THIS LIFE LIVED ON THE RUN AND
    BROKEN HEARTS BEATING
    LIKE THE SOUND OF THE TUM TUM.

    PEACE AND LUV YALL....:heart: :hot:
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this...different.
     
  3. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    validate my emancipation

    excellent word choice.
    i can feel the passion of this piece.

    Creative flow

    NittyGritt ReddClay
     
  4. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It Was Just A Bad Apple

    “So one man did you wrong” maybe it
    was two maybe even three, doesn’t mean
    you should curse the whole dang tree!

    I know it’s hard and your heart seem so
    broken that the pieces are scattered and
    you can’t stop choking.

    Choking from the let down and put down
    and then he went away, maybe even left you
    with a baby, he might have even said he would
    be back some day.

    You see my sista’s there are some good men, “yeah
    we would all like to know where, but we have to
    learn to let go of the hurt and pain of yesterday,
    if not we will never find them and if we are blessed to
    they will never stay.

    Because so many have done us wrong, we have got
    to stand tall and be strong. But please just remember a
    man can only do what we let them, so let’s check ourselves
    before we cast all the blame, not all men are the same.

    Just look to your heart for the part you did play, let’s try to
    love them, get along and quit sending them out to stray.
    One bad apple does not spoil the whole bunch, but stop
    look, learn and listen the next time, before you go to lunch…

    Copyright by Yvonne Coleman-Burney (Queen) 2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a dip in the core ........bring us more !!!
     
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