Black Poetry : ...thru my eyes.

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  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish that…
    you could see yourself
    the way that i do…

    then… you'd be
    amazed too... at the
    way your feet
    seem to fit
    far too impeccab-ly
    inside a pair of shoes
    that in all actuality
    should be at least…
    20 years too big for you

    complexity would
    appear to be
    your constant companion
    yet simply stated…
    you are a proud warrior
    of afrikan descent…
    extreme-ly talented
    a black nationalist
    humanist & culturist
    who phenomenal-ly
    created pharaoh nights
    while basking
    in the light
    of bittersweet days

    & i wish you could see
    how you move me...
    …with those dimples
    dancing delightful-ly…
    daring me not to believe
    that i can indeed
    trust in someone again…
    i wish you could see
    how especial-ly different
    you are to me & how
    it seems that from the
    moment we were
    introduced all i’ve ever
    wanted to do
    …is love you

    you steal my soul away…

    when you rest your
    beautiful head against
    my breast during
    intimate quests for solace
    & i can feel you breathe
    when you speak
    of your deep yearning
    for a world of harmony
    for you&me
    …where myles & amira
    can grow happily…
    free to become everything
    that they will dream of being…

    …myrevolutionary

    i love your peace &
    i am humbled beyond
    belief that you chose me
    … to see you


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thisissoverybeautiful...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    :D

    Umm...I'll assume that this is about me, since, to my knowledge, you don't have any other revolutionaries up in your bed :)

    I wish i could see myself through your eyes...sometimes i do...and this piece has helped that endeavor immensely...

    thank you so much just being there...and listening to my rants. I love you so much, queen...
     
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    Aww isn't this special???? why don'y yall kiss already;)
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE.....
    ONLY IF A WOMAN SPOKE OF ME THAT WAY...
    ILL MAKE HER MY QUEEN.....FO REAL


    "THE WAY YOU DO IT TO ME IS LIKE NO OTHER,SO,
    DO IT AGAIN---AND WATCH MY LOVE REFLECT UPON YOU"--LURK
     
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    Love looks good on you. This is real Miss elayne period.

    Saleem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was lovely and full of beauty
    ya heart hold sweet notes
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    seven. thank you for taking the time my dear.
    mensi. your assumption... correct. revolutionaries...
    i can only put up with one at a time... so... tag! you're it!!
    you don't ever have to thank me for reciprocity... & your
    love... is returned.
    bish. shaddup!! :tongue: (LOL)
    lurk. i'm sure there's a woman out there right now
    thinking the same things aboutcha!! thank you!!
    saleem. thanks for noticing! :wink:
    rich. your heart holds all the sweet notes.. i'm just
    tryin' to keep up!! i appreciate you!!

    &... :heart: itsallLove, chirens!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes poet yes poet

    you have a beautiful pen poet
    a gift

    mmmm


    DSS
     
  10. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    soja. you always have a way of sayin' just
    a little... that means a whole lot! i thank you...
    for the love & my pen thanks you for the comps! :)

    itsallLove, chile.
     
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