Black Poetry : Thru a Momma's Eyes (Inspired by the Urban Jazz Coaliation of Columbus ,Ohio)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thru a Momma's eyes one that see's and sometimes cries.
    Pleasure brought you into being, sometimes not believing what I am seeing.
    My love sustains you this I know.
    As I watch you as you grow.
    I catch you when you stumble.
    Never once will you hear her grumble.
    Rejoicing when you fly.
    Tears may flow often when you are looking thru a Momma's eyes.
    As I watch you growing, surprised and sometimes dismayed.
    I found peaced through understanding.
    And from your teachings you sometimes strayed.
    But, I found peace that passes understanding...gonna always be there for your soft or hard landing.
    Yes tears may flow often...
    When you see thru a momma's eyes!

    BJS(C)2003:love:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is BEAUTIFULLY written...im lovin' it!:)
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading!

    I am delighted my fellow scribe that you are feeling this bittersweet vibe.
    I wrote this while on vacation in Columbus, Ohio at a Jazz set of all places...LOL
    They did a piece of the same title and as they began to play tears flowed freely , as soon as I could see I was digging for my fast writing pen, ever ready with my pad in my evening purse, I wrote simultaneously every verse...
    Now, that's what you call "Inspiration', they were quite taken by surprise when I read it to them after the set got rained out. They literally played up a storm!
    It has been a wonderful experience...
    And as always...
    Blessings On Ya House!:D
     
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    Yo, this is flo' tyte
    When I read it my spirit felt right
    Cause lookin' through a momma's eyes is something that can't be tookin light
    So keep writin' with all yo might
    Love and Peace,
    Foxy.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey MsB dis was tyte through da eyes of momma !
    i'm feelin it within ...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte!! :toast:
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fellow scribes!

    Thanks fellow scribes, I so appreciate your comments! Your words continue to encourage me and inspire my muse...

    Blessings On ya House!:D
     
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    THis was beautiful...there is no love like a momma's love its one in its own :)
    This was touching...fo real :)
     
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    yes this is lovely
    wonderful msluciousb
    Peace
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks my Poetic sisters, I appreciate yo vibe...

    Wish I could figure out how to lay the song and the poem to a wave file it would be tight, I performed it with the band on the second night right at the end of the song....I have been invited back to join them again and they are coming to KC!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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