Black Poetry : Throwin Game

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  1. ebonygoddess

    ebonygoddess Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm new guys so bare with me.

    Throwin game

    Roam in a pack
    Dressed in black
    Tryin mac
    But you game is wack
    jack.
    I turn my back
    Your jaws half slack
    So now you yak
    My ears you hack
    How you can do this and that
    In the sack
    You make me laugh
    You can't attract
    With a line like that
    I make a pact
    not to react
    I'll be exact
    you just can't act
    Common sense you lack
    Now thats a fact.

    Unfinished. you can continue on if you want to.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new found family of love & bond
    welcome u kin and this was tyte flowin ! :)
    happy you here to share upon us all welcome in
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    welcome....
    tight flow...
     
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    ...so I turned around
    tuned out ya sound
    I wanna find someone who
    can really get down
    not a clown
    no one who lays around
    somebody who can
    do this town
    one who is sincere
    who will really be here
    no excessive fears
    won't cause me tears
    no jeers
    lears
    just big careers
    changin da gears....



    :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ebonygoddess!! Great to have you here. :)
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so she switches lanes
    changes thoughts in her brain
    this chic maintains
    no need to complain
    bout being engulfed in love chains
    where it always rains
    and happiness never remains
    shut up and make your own she explains
    while he sits back and campaigns
    for her to take him back to her domains
    where they can pop champagnes
    to see how much of him she can sustain
    she laughs, "What's your name, Waynes?"
    For what you can do for me I can myself attains
    want to really please me, get on the trains
    cuz you right i really am trying to refrains
    from kicking you *** for my own entertains.
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
    WELCOME!!! :wave:
     
  7. ebonygoddess

    ebonygoddess Active Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Gosh!! you guys are so nice and friendly. But I feel like I way out of my league here. I read some of your poems and i can't help but be in awe. So you may not know how much your recognition ust mean to me.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ebonygoddess

    Your doing fine.. keep the flow coming. In no time.. your skills will be. Don't question and you will see. You had it all the time.

    " You could only be who you are by being who you are. "

    What a beautiful Signature.
     
  9. ebonygoddess

    ebonygoddess Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Hodee and all else.

    Your signature is pretty deep.

    "Take away a man's mouth, and he loses his mind. A man with-out words loses his spirit. A man with-out giving, has no chance of return. In a circular moment, with motion it all comes in. Give . . . share, your mind and you shall receive. In receiving there, lies your life."
     
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