Black Poetry : throwback

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its internal
    i know somebody feel me
    must be plagarism cuz my heart wrote this 4 me



    Throwback

    How could i
    Say I love you
    And don’t expect the same
    I am the one to blame
    I just can’t leave the game
    I blame u for my pain
    Now that I’m alone
    What do I have to gain…………….

    When I held you
    Laid my head on yor chest
    I was home
    I could finally rest

    After a long day
    In the streets
    Trying to perfect techniques
    But lust control these streets
    I couldn’t resist temptation
    How I wanted to be in separation
    I couldn’t take being locked in your arms
    When women appeared by the swarm
    I had to be bout my self
    Now girl I’m really bout myself

    When u love someone
    U didn’t even know
    The way the water flows
    An the wind blows
    U into another path
    We all wish
    We could get back something we had

    Now that im by myself
    I wanna get to know u girl
    I’m sorry I was a disrupt to your world
    I know it seems hard to understand
    But baby I wasn;t a man
    When I first fell in love
    I didn’t want my insecurities to get in the way love
    I didn’t want to you so I decided to leave
    That was the only that I could breath
    Into your arms
    Was it that i
    Didn’t want to see u cry

    When u love someone
    U didn’t even know
    The way the water flows
    An the wind blows
    U into another path
    We all wish
    We could get back something we had

    Baby, I want to feel your love again
    Your touch, oh how u make me glad
    I’d even take back the times u made me mad

    Your embrace, pictures can’t capture
    Memories, a tainted luxury
    Please sit here, next to me…

    Ohhhhhh……

    When u love someone
    U don’t even know
    The water the blows……
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful...very heartfelt, yeah your heart must have wrote this, that the only explanation for this. Much love to you.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak it..
    feeling this so deep
    oh so nice
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hard to believe the words you mouthed
    so i wasn't too put off when your d#ck moved south
    i hate the playa and the game
    and i am sorry that my response seems lame
    but what is it about men who utter
    words of love and then when we speak back they shudder
    shaking off a true sisters heart and words
    stabbed me in the heart with a sword
    make me beleive this is where you wanted to be
    and now the only thing i beleive is you need to be free
    can't stress you down with how i really feel
    so i've moved on and i am keeping this real
    i am a strong enough women to understand the deal.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    really love dis one
     
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    Speak on my Poet!

    Though this poem made me sad...reminding me of the
    love I lost and wished I had...I know that the one thing
    constant is change if we could simply just engage the
    man and woman diaglogue that will lead us to true
    solidarity! I weep for you and I weep for me!

    Blessings On Your House! :peace: :peace:
     
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