Black Poetry : Throughout

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, May 14, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

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    The Big 8
    The rounds we go through
    To withstand our fate.
    Listening for
    The stars to contribute
    What we connect in the middle to do.
    Ability to be merastically calmed
    By the curves of degrees to lead.
    While expressing the logic of the 8.
    Being a nummber of great faith.
    Unto the beginning starting with me
    And
    Never leaving until again blown into oblivion
    To last infinintly throughout.
     
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    Sis, nice piece, though I'm not sure I grasp it all. Love the line "Listening for The stars to contribute"

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    I guess it's basically how our subjects(big 8)can come to life in different(infinent) forms. It carries us always throughout the verses vibrantly(swirling) to become our enlightenment(ability to understand certain subjects)!
    That's what I'm getting out of this right now Sis.
     
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    great n short piece.love it
     
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    Appreciate that Bru!
     
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    Thanks, Sis.
     
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    love the message within it....
     
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    Thanks for reading my writings Sis!
     
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    Very impotant! It affected our $$RICH$$, ya always make us women feel good!
     
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