Black Poetry : Through that hallway

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  1. candeesweet

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    As I Pose
    The words save face
    Are heard through the tight walls
    That search the hidden energies
    Why must my face be read?
    Like a book remembered @ the half priced book store
    Memories of a friend telling me
    About her vague thoughts of being eyed for.
    The same color wall in every apartment
    Waiting on your personality
    To add portraits that r pasted
    Paintings woven on cloth
    How could it be true about you & me?
    Hallways seeming to be plain to the point
    Square it my be but the ending
    Doesn't know why it has to be.
     
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    Dear Sister Poet Candeesweet,

    A solemn piece. Every line, as always, alive and inventive. The subject's emotions come through clearly, allowing me to feel what she feels. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

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    Happy that we connect as usual!
     
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    Me, too. I so get your work. Loving it!
     
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    very well done .....
     
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