Black Poetry : Through My Window...Looking for Penny Brunswick

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thoughts of you construct a window
    Made inside my inner cubicle of darkness
    Carpet covered portable walls
    Moving with me day to day
    Sometime by my own hand
    The walls close in

    Yet through this claustrophobic tightness
    The pain and suffering
    The systematic madness
    There is the window
    There by love's fate
    So that I may see you

    Looking through
    My heart grows warmer
    I open the window just a bit
    Feeling the sweet breeze of your freshness
    The rush of air causes my smile
    It is you
    Through my window
    A window that never needs to be cleaned
    It is pure and sparkling
    Your reflection

    I press my face against its rose tinted panes
    To touch you
    Love you
    You are always there
    Just outside
    My window

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i smile...

    that people do create windows in our hearts...
    enjoyed how you expressed your escape...

    write~
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, BE.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    BE

    I am loving this one...you conjure images of....(picture this)....somewhere out there....yet closer than the speed of thought ...Penny's face is pressed against the rose tinted pane...looking back at you.

    You need to quit (giving me these visions)! But don't you dare! :)

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY BE.....................I JUST

    LOVE HOW U SLIDE OUT THE LOVEST POETIC FLOW
    AND GRACE SOULS WITHIN TOUCH MAN ! YA GOT IT
    GOING ON!:toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  6. Heartbeat

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    Thank you Poets.
     
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