Black Poetry : Through My Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by heartofantiger, Oct 19, 2004.

  1. heartofantiger

    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Through a pen I see life
    As much as life, it bleeds
    Through a pen I see life
    As much as life, it's either empty or full
    Used and abused
    Chewed, spat and screwed
    Through my pen I see what I resemble
    Forced labor untill I bleed
    Speak so much yet never heard
    Though my pen I see my destiny
    I am but a systematic servant
    When I do
    Am not praised
    When I make a mistake
    Cant be erased
    Through my pen I see my strenght
    I see my good will and virtue
    My soul and unbroken spirit
    As much as life, my pen is either empty or full
    lost and found
    Removed once dead
    Replaced once out of led
    Through my pen I control
    Every curve and every step
    Only my own and no one else
    I can be cold or very warm
    I can be graceful or bashful
    I may be broken yet not crumble
    I could be controled
    But never humbled
    I cant see ahead only reflect
    On what I have done
    And lived to regret
    Through my pen I can reach
    To the willing I can teach
    Can formulate and deliver speech
    I can through my pen
    Give life
    Because many things have been compared to human life
    I chose to see mine through my pen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so deeply felt
    takes me back to over look my life
    from the ink of da pen as the blood
    of my soul ....keep flowing deep i'm listening
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt this very well posed...
    nice work poet!!!
     
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    inituitive
     
  5. heartofantiger

    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Mad respect to my poetry brothers and sisters!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: Respect given back player because this drop was tight :welldone:
     
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    yes heartofatiger
    through the pen
    we see and feel
    so many amazing things
    much love on this drop
    it flow in a power
    that is deeply felt
    the strenght of the pen
    and one self

    Blue:heart:

     
  8. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya on this one, this was a great piece keep flowin!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome poem, well spoken
     
  10. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you piece cuts deep. NICE
     
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