Black Poetry : Through eyez of Love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Once i looked
    deep into her
    eyez
    the greater beauty
    to
    mesmerize
    in the face
    of
    wear & tear
    through da far
    reaching stare
    visional glare

    Da love is pose'd
    tyme after tyme
    again & again

    the look was tasty
    all firey with hope
    warm inner glow
    where sweet song
    bring angels near
    she fear not
    yet a tear
    silently know tyme
    was here
    in the tiny balls of
    her eyez
    a story released
    past toil, past cares
    peace was within their

    Through eyez of love
    a rapid beat of faith
    this was of heart
    a love to trace
    i place wit me her eyez
    she see grace
    I look deep into her eyez of love :eek:
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was simple and sweet

    and did I mention EXTREMEly beautiful?

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my thank u poet of the week
    dis makes me feel mushy inside
    thankz
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIKE ALWAYS MY BRUTHA, TYTE AS HELL...
     
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    The eyes always reveal.......

    Loving this piece.
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin it, lovin, man you are awesome :bowdown:
     
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    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    so much love, I really like this.
     
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    yes this is
    simply wonderful
    yes indeed
    lovely
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz family
    without y'all
    their would be no me
    the eyez see deeper
    within da soul
    and love is born
     
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    confession

    o k, i admit it, finally, i look 4 ur work. read it often, post on it seldom.

    i think i like ur lov lines the best :bowdown:

    somebody sign this guy up sooooooooooon :deal:

    thanks rich
     
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