Black Poetry : THROUGH DA EYEZ OF A BEAUTY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through her eyez lay a story
    speakin of a love ever so holy
    whispering about a heart of glory
    da beauty that so moly

    Eyez speak of caressin fate
    compassionate warmth
    dat's never late
    tellin me of a sensual bliss
    deep cares and erotic kiss

    Inside her story speak of pain
    yet a rapture never tame
    from dem eyez tearz dat stain
    from da heart still to claim

    Softly her eyez speak
    gentle low and meek
    wit a sweet flair so unique
    dat continue to make me feast
    like a humanized beast
    for da lovely embedded treat

    eyez callin , callin me
    listening to her story
    through her eyez so royal
    talkin to my mind
    as my soul feel unspoken words
    my heart lone to embrace.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When eyez speak they speak from the heart so that another heart will know. The warmth exudes from your ink to the page, flowing like passion. :)
     
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    yes watz ......when eyez meet a heart starts to beat ...guess i'm
    lost inside them eyez that won't let go of my mental and soul.....
     
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    your words speak so beautifully much love... ( and thanks for your very kind words)
     
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    thank u so much for the warmth and love poeticly 4g0tt3n
     
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    u must reveal the inspiration behind this piece love!:luvv:
     
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    In time ...forth da eyez will be revealed that has inspired my pen
    big thankz for the visit and warth
     
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    im like wow myself this person must have you in a daze
    as you gaze
    into them Heavenly
    Eyez!

    :smooch:
     
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    yes indeed eyez of my morrow.......
     
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    that was filled wit sensation
    nice flow

    blackluv and bp
     
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