Black Poetry : Three strikes, still playin the game

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say three strikes you're out
    still am playin the game
    been on the side lines
    now I'm back again

    first strike out u screwed my world
    you said those friends were nothing but girls
    till I found that you were down in the game
    and messin’ with my head was your only aim

    strike two you made me fall in love with you
    and forget all my goals I came to do
    seems like u just wanted to scratch an itch
    Too bad coach didn’t tell you…Payback’s a b***

    Strike three now you the gem of this ****
    Been friends for a few years till I got in deep
    You made me live a split reality
    Tryna be me yet wanting you desperately

    You get hit twice
    They say the third one’ll git ya
    But what don’t kill you only make you stronger
    I’m back three times better than before

    I’m taking all this **** out the door!
    Mutated to a super b***
    With my semi-automatic mind-set on arm:uzi:
    Don’t say I dina warn ya!

    Bang! This b*** shot ya!
     
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    lol... that's real
    but you cant let corny cats
    give you a b*tch pill
    so you can swollow it
    and bottle it up inside
    from lovers that have lied
    dont allow it to stunt
    your elevation
    for even a month
    of masquerading
    is too long
    cause wizards cast silly spells
    that leave your head ringing
    like a gong
    going
    BOOOOOONNNNNGGGG!!!!

    peace
    khasm
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KHASM you dunno how confused and seriously hurt I am. I wonder if there ever is a good guy out there!
     
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    to echo what khasm said, "...you can't let corny cats give you a bit*h pill". I could not have said it better myself. Through all the pain there is a lesson to be learned. I'm not sure whta that is at the moment, but it is. I have been where you are with women playing me like a cheap violin. Writing as a catharsis, a means to vent is good . Don't let a fool control your day queen. Nice scribe. That blak man in shining skin is out there looking for you.

    peace
     
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    he's there
    pray
    and let the one above
    lead you way...

    don't lose faith sis
    cause then you already loss miss...

    peace
    khasm
     
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    OK...SISTER TO SISTER...

    Unfortunately, we've all been there before. But you have two beautiful black men telling you there are more beautiful black men for you (and me too ;) ). What you forgot is: The game with 3 strikes, has nine innings and if the game is tied we go until one wins. Three strikes is ok...but you have another at bat and after that one...you have another at bat. Game ain't over!
     
  7. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know that there are more men, its just discouraging at times to pay them any mind. Thanks so much for the encouraging words KHASM, Blak, and Royal_T. I'm just gonna be on my own for a while and try to recollect myself.
     
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    GAW-****--- I understand where you coming from ma, forreal! Just vent, and don't let is poison your soul, but trust me I FEEL U! Peace
     
  9. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legacy21...vent is what i am doing, I feel much better, yesterday I was angry, today I am just hurtin...its all steps. I know I'll be okay.


    I'm just sayin...
     
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