Black Poetry : THREE SIMPLE WORDS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 28, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen to these words I say with such sincerity
    as I reveal to you what has been lying deep inside of me.
    There are three words which are so difficult to say
    so allow me to give examples of what I wish to convey.
    For the friendship developed through the years
    when you comforted me with laughter as well as tears.
    For the joy you emit from your sexy smile,
    please believe I would run to see it for miles and miles.
    For the one who can only get me out of my serious zone
    as I hear your voice, that voice with its sensual tone.
    For understanding when disagreements I deliberately started,
    I thank you for remaining, never leaving me broken-hearted.
    It's because of you I am now able to reveal
    my true emotions which can no longer be concealed.
    You are everything I prayed for in my mate
    as you define class, dignity and grace.
    So as I say these words that are long overdue
    please know my soul is now released to say "I LOVE YOU"
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that last line my sista...says SO much
    it echos the release of past burden and the acceptance of hope for tomorrow...
    beautiful my sista :)
     
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    this was truly tight
    whoever is on the other end of this one
    will enjoy it to the fullest...lovely scribe
    one love
    khasm
     
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    It manages to say "I love you" true
    And wants to be a poem
    Like you
     
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    kenyatta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You expressed that so sincerely that I'm afraid to see what's on the other side...and hope they don't have to see it either. (smiles) I loved that work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt the emotions flowin within this u expressed
    to so well through ya pen .....tyte
     
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    sweet emotional flow
    love the way it just laid
     
  8. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thank you for your kind words everyone. It's just so reassuring to know my words can touch others.

    Triniti and Ms. Angel thank you for your words on everything I post.

    $Rich$ - you have been supporting everything I post whether it's good or bad. Thank you, my humble brother.

    Kenyatta - ever since you hit this site, you have wowed me. Keep blessing us!!

    Khasm and 1poet - your appreciation for my words are heartfelt. Thanks.
     
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    indeed most welcome ya pen scribe poetry so smooth
    i love ya work keep droppin it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so naturally laid down, it just flowed...very nice.
     
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