Black Poetry : Three little words

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my life there have been so many things that seem to
    Define who I am. And in that definition I never felt really
    Complete. And then you happened to me
    And that feeling of incomplete seemed to fade away.
    I found in you a friend and confidant. I found in you
    A peace that seemed to elude me. You are important to
    Me for more than the obvious reason. Our physical
    Connection is real but the heart strings hold stronger
    In my mind I see a forever and a day in my heart
    I hear your words of love for an eternity.
    So what does that mean for you?
    That for my present and near future you
    Are my all and you now are responsible for
    All my smiles when my heart skips a beat
    It is because of you eyes and your touch
    OOH ( I digress). To sum it all up
    In three little words.
    I love You. :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh yes and i love u too
    when i define my heart
    it always say u , calling
    spelling ya name

    this was beautiful
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya $$$R$$$ for the support. I am glad you enjoyed.
     
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    most welcome sista
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was so sweet and ful of luv
    that i hope one day that i wud be able to say those three little words
    that wud make sumbody fill big
    i hope 2 say that 2 my family...shoot does words hardly eva cum out
    but very nice writtin so flo on sistah

    blackluv and bp
     
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    thanks so much Ghetto. Let me tell you it is so much easier for me to write it than to say it. Try that it may work you got skills so drop a nice one. lol:roll:
     
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