Black Poetry : threats

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 1, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Threats

    Trying to keep it easy

    I’m ready

    Got my papers, I’m legal
    How u forsake the one and only

    I am..
    Gotdamn
    A deranged
    Why even read and post
    Disgrace the host
    Give toast to those who boast
    The murder I wrote

    Tainted tracks
    Now I bust back
    On cats
    Who claim my rap
    Try to fill my shoes
    But you can’t tap

    Now I can see if it was love,
    Young cuz
    Now I gotta take action
    Oif course illegal but let my intelligence
    Outshine irrelevance
    An I tried to stay benevolent

    It was that I needed to say
    Identity theft, an the bill I’m left to pay
    Struggling to hold my own, for my own robbed me today
    Jay, what more can I say
    Young man, tell me to pray
    I’m only promised my brain, heart and soul, today

    I leave confusion an anger from a stranger
    All I got left is shots, this is the chamber

    Tainted Platinum (aka modern day slave)

    thanks for the support
    The book coming soon to a store near u
    even though i was the only one who believed so

    Copyright daniel davis 2k4
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up feeling ya scribe u vibing
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop....
    and congrats on the book....Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin the rhythm of those wrods.
     
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