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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Sep 9, 2002.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I write like a scribe
    thoughts of my mind
    emotions in my soul
    my hopes my goals.

    And like a jungle cat
    i stealthily
    pursue and acquire things reality

    Like a dog without a home
    i roam
    seeking bounty, and preying
    mercilessly
    bleeding my creativity

    I graze like a bovine creature
    thoughtfully
    formulating thoughts
    systematically
    the order of life and things to be

    I write, I think, I make things be.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u write and make a poetic impact
    flow on continue da write
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    remembering the impact of this smooth piece ....thankz
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin dis one again
     
  5. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you make things be most def, you made it so easy to see your thoughts, and never before had i seen one.........one love
     
  6. Prizefighter16

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    puttin power into your thoughts, very upliftin poem, and very well written

    keep the flow goin... :cool:
     
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