Black Poetry : Thoughts

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As hard as I try I cant get you out of my heart.
    I promise myself that I can be near you and not melt
    To hear you voice and not shiver. I said this time would be different
    That I could walk past you with out blinking my eye.
    But I lied.
    No matter how hard I try I can’t get you out of my dreams.
    Closed eyes bring back visions of passion so sweet and touches
    So light that I get goose bumps just thinking about it,
    I told my self I could stop dreaming of you .
    But I lied
    It doesn’t seem to matter what I do I can’t seem to
    Get you out of my bed. Every time I’m near you
    My body sends out a SOS and you gladly respond.
    I try to ignore you and to walk away I tell you
    I don’t love you or need you
    But I lied.
    I think it is time I tell my self the truth.
    I am so Open and that is
    NO lie….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it be known that ya heart feels and love
    that someone dearly , no need to confuse self
    with inner lies ....let him know ya love is real.
     
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    $$$R$$$$ the heart never lies only the lips
    and my eyes always tell the wold what my heart feels.

    Thanks for the feedback
     
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    as i look deeper in them eyez
    to see the love u pose & surprise
    to speak what the heart feel
    and to know what's truely real
    most welcome sweetie..............
     
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    In life I found that there are two things you can't hide...
    and that's Fire:flame: and Love:flame: ...they both carry flames!
    I enjoyed the flow.
     
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    That is so true...
    Thanks Queen for the luv...
     
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    wow the words that are pouring from you are right on target cause i feel the same way. keep it up lil sis.:terrific:
     
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    Thank you good to have some one who can relate lol
     
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    I like it..
    NO... I love it.
     
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    :hearts4: Thanks so much Sweet.
     
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