Black Poetry : Thoughts....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 20, 2006.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Placed upon perfections cynical pin tical are now my thought and deeds
    Crafted and formatted out of chaos and strife are now my own actions, thoughts and deeds
    See I'm walking into or is it I'm walking out of a situation I created
    There are too many variables or scenarios played through this stereo to be translated
    I feel like I'm walking down that long extended hallway in a horror flick
    and that safe place that now seems like a million steps I will never get..****!
    I'm moving between blessings and transgressions to lessons and sin sessions
    Now I seem to be asking myself 21 questions
    letting it Burn inside my own confessions
    they say the moral of a man is how he stands after **** his the fan's
    They also say that is also only as strong as his support from his queens hands
    man O man
    See there is no tranquility in the ability to question ones own senility
    Better yet their own sanity within a calamity of how did I get this ability...... in the 1st place!
    I'm a case in a basket carrying my own casket a man of many faces so there is no way to unmask it
    I can make moves and slide like grease or I can throw shade on your sun and show U what's beef
    Outside I'm the leader of a triad
    but on the inside I'm a constant nomad

    I'm backed by thousands but only understood by one
    I have 3 guardians the father the holy spirit and the sun

    I'm a health nut, a junk food junkie,
    I'm also a vegan but right now I have the hamburger munchies
    I contradict my own contradictions as I say do as I say and not as I do
    I've sold everything except for my own *** just to wear the latest shoe
    I'm a child of a bastard dad who never had a dad
    I'm a good father and dad but I was never married so that makes my children bastards...dag!

    I'm a wolf in sheep's clothing the black sheep of my clan
    I'm a rebel without a cause so I will shoot U man!

    I'm Python
    I'm jimmy
    I'm Brian
    I'm James

    But I am just a work in progress no matter what's the name!

    02/17/2006
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was straight to the point. i like your style caramelphyton. keep them flo's coming. i would do you but decided to leave it alone. i'll come hit cha at the right time. flo on poet.:love:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,python.
    I love yr honesty in the piece.
    Oh so nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u smokin da joint up this was tyte and real
     
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    Dam deep thought in mind
    That was heated for real
    I was loving the flow bruh
    Welcome back Poetic Brother
     
  6. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm moving between blessings and transgressions to lessons and sin sessions
    HOT LINE.

    YOU PUT SO MUCH OF YOURSELF IN THIS ONE MAN I'M LEFT SPEECHLESS. SOME POEMS WILL SPEAK TO YOU WELL THIS ONE IS YELLING HOT DROP KEEP DOING YOUR THING CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND REMINDING AS THAT WE ARE ALL WORKS IN PROGRESS.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin who you're saying you be. The word play was off the hook. Skurred of you!!!!!!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    who you gon shoot chile LOL :read: the python and the many shades of his skin
     
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    Real tight drop!:1on1:
     
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    You are in our thoughts as well, peace.
     
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