Black Poetry : Thoughts

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  1. CsBabygirl

    CsBabygirl Member MEMBER

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    Once Again Bare With Me On This One....

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    Once there was two,
    Then we came as one.
    Now there is two again,
    Back where we begun.
    You say you never meant to hurt me,
    But I'm not sure thats true.
    This time you got the best of me,
    I should've never said I love you.
    Now all you want is my sacred forbidden fruit,
    I'm not sure your worthy of the fulfillment and sweetness it will bring.
    After one taste, night after night,
    Countless times my phone shall ring.
    When I lay to slumber,
    I often wonder what could have been.
    Then I realized you were the one who never saw it fit for us to win.
    In this never ending game of love,
    Injuries and heartbreaks lead to the end of everyones playing season.
    Time to put up the player cards and receive your golden goblet for many
    Disappointing let downs, and set backs, heartbreaks, and back stabs.
    But whatever happened to real love, fate, destiny, honesty, sincerity and most of all the trust between you and me?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm feel ya on this flow head express
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Tight write...tight write...tight write.

    I know someone who needs to read this piece RIGHT NOW. :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us...the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As a reader I believe you did a good job of conveing your feelings.
    Thanx for sharing..
     
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    Very Nice.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was intense, those words flowed honestly and leave quite an impression. This was potent.
     
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