Black Poetry : Thoughts...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msjulia2u, Dec 1, 2004.

  1. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [Thoughts……
    Today I think of what if….

    What if you gave in, opened up and let me walk in??

    What if you stood before me with your heart

    All your trust

    Every one of your cares

    With your affection

    Your love

    Your body

    What if u stood before me with all your imperfections

    All your questions

    Your desires

    Your moods

    Doubts

    Determinations

    Adventures

    All your failures

    Your past

    What if u stood before me as is

    What if
    I accepted ….



    Signed: Me
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like it would be, could be, paradise. There is such a carefree quality to your flows--I'm enjoying your work.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Ms Julia.

    Very nice....very nice.

    :thanks: for sharing with the Family your thoughts of unconditional love.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and what if i confess my loyality
    and offer my comfort & caress
    what if u
    openly sweetly say yes
    what if all your desires
    of love was on the line
    and ya heart speak in tune
    musically singing my song
    what if
    my touch bring u joy
    and make u feel da essence
    of tenderness
    what if
    u lay in my arm and spill ya heart out
    and relax in my slumber of chamber
    what if
    tomorrow
    all affectional maze leak
    and to perfection it weave
    way to manifest love
    just what if !

    Tyte drop sista Queen
     
  5. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm Rich what if I just say I LOVE YOU!! hehehehehe
    ok you bout to make me pull my pen out again.... I like that

    thank you for the response it was heavely you have such away of inspiring thank you for your presence here.... Ms J
     
  6. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz ... you busted me... I am a very free spirited person... thank you for enjoying me...Ms J
     
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    Yes the powerful question of what if. I enjoyed your flow my sister and the question of all questions " What If "
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it flow so the love show
    as it glide cross da canvas
    most welcome
    just what if i say luv u too
    whewwwww !
    u taking me there ......lol
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i like the "what ifs"....makes the flow have a wonderful playfulness...
    makes me smile....and i like that....
     
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