Black Poetry : Thoughts!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, May 25, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some times I think I see too much!
    My eyes pick up the pain of others.
    My arms ache to hold and comfort
    but there is too much pain for me
    to console.
    My heart is full of love and compassion
    But there are not enough empty vessels
    to fill with these emotions.
    So I write and I write trying to
    express what I see and how I perceive
    these things.
    And some times I feel that even my writing is
    not enough to say to the world we
    all need a big hug, a kind word, and
    a slient prayer.
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FA REAL!!!!!!

    :look: hey that wuz DEEP, i can relate to this one a whole bunch. sometimes i think i think too much bcuz i feel the need to break down everything, like it's a puzzle or something........i love this one..........it screams me through and through
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya with this. I too often can sense too much, feel too much, if only I only would heed that call...Anywho, well written, well felt.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop here
     
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    very nicely pose thatgirl {{{{{{{{{{HUG}}}}}}}}}}
    we all do indeed need that:grouphug:
    Peace
    blueWater:heart:
     
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    definitely feelin ya on this. great concept and nice drop
     
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    Nice drop of the mind
    Senses that dictate all
    Much love on this piece poet
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alot of love in this piece.
    Just what the world needs.
    One love
     
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    love this piece very much keep up the good writes.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    U blew me away with this one.
    This is so deep.
     
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