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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 14, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I see you in the my dreams
    It gets harder each day…
    The desire of what you bring…
    Invades my mind…
    Takes me to new levels
    As you touch me with all you do
    Sitting here wishing it didn’t hurt so bad.
    Do you even know?
    Is it just a game?
    Believe what tomorrow can bring
    For the day have gone by
    I am reaching for you
    Are you reaching for me?
    My life pass through my thoughts..
    And you don’t have a clue
    I cry for you every night
    The pain I cant bare..
    My love have been true…
    Everywhere I go I see couples…
    Wishing it was you and I
    Holding hands in the rain
    And my thoughts pass to the pen
    To a blank canvass and write to you
    Do you know I am crying?
    My heart aches so badly
    And you have no clue
    Is this all a game?
    Do I need a shield?
    Or am I the one you really want?
    I think of you the whole day through
    And in a hush…
    I whisper your name in the middle of the night
    Can you hear me call you?
    For when I close my eyes
    I can feel your lips on mine
    Yearning for that one touch…
    Only you can give…
    Do you have a clue?
    I am crying in so much pain
    As I see you in the my dreams
    It gets harder each day…
    Do you know…

    (C) 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!!
    heavy thoughts indeed whewwwwwwwwwwww!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very deeply laid, very touching write.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So emotive and real - I am touched by every line.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love on dis family!!!
     
  6. define

    define Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can really relate to the yearning in this. And asking the question of a relationship being mutual. Nice drop Angel, peaces
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome it came off grand i love da flow
     
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    A bleeding heart hurting
    for a desired love!!!!

    Such a heartfelt scribe!

    Lovely drop sis!!!!!!!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, define, purplemoon
    thanks for the love on dis family!!!
     
  10. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Now that's love...pure...unadulterated...love.

    :thanks: for sharing your intimate feelings about him with us.

    :toast:
     
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