Black Poetry : thoughts (pt.2 of the LOVE trilogy)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Feb 22, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sat eatin chicken and cornbread
    when you made my mind flip ova
    to why the sky is blu
    (this you said would make me more of a woman)

    u said it would make me intune
    with the spirits of the west
    SO I WOULD BE THE EARTH

    so i climbed rocks
    that talked,
    and sung,
    and scrambled,
    out of my way
    so that i could
    find yin/yang
    (balance you said, would make me intune with the spirits of the West...)

    i jumped over 20 oceans
    just to be cradled

    i was left weak....
    i sat, confined
    in questioning,

    as to were the stars
    light met the earth,
    so to make a map

    that generated from
    invisible fingertips
    ( to make the invisible become visible, you said, you had to have the power to move the stars)

    to be continued....

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  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what was that you was eating sis:)
    seriously this flow is awesome
    smooth
    very nice indeed
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey bluwater,
    how's it been? its nice hearing from u again,
    thanks for reading my poem
    much love,
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, something is feeding your mind to bring out these wonderful images, very nice.
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watzinthename, i appreciate it...
    much :heart:,
    -story
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaaaah Yes...Sister Story!

    We've been missing your flavor!
    Nice to see read you again...
    All wrapped up in the imagery
    & vibe of this piece...
    Can't wait for the continuance!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes ya scribe is off the hook
    where u been dis been missed
    happy to feel da vibe of dis
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jey rich, angelic, i was seriously begining to miss this place, its good to strech your wings again...
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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    :devil: :hot: Ok now I have to go back and find part #1.. whoa.
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks caramelpyton Pt.1 is called SKIN if your looking for it....
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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