Black Poetry : Thoughts on Getting Ahead

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When We stop just scuffling and trying to get ahead

    And take a good look at ourselves instead

    We'll see as so many great ones before us have seen

    Hold'em up, don't get uppity! Look into what i really mean

    There's a trickster working to make us warp our own mind

    To the degree that we won't even be able to find

    That there's no need to get a head, 'cause we've already got one

    When we don't use the one we've got that's when we've got none

    That is none working for us and we become people insane

    Like chickens with their heads cut off, running all out of our lane

    Discombobulated,

    Yeah, That's what i said

    Walking around thinking we're alive,

    While already DEAD! :uzi:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I really like this, this was crafty the way you posed it. To thine own self be true.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da handz of wisdom flowin in the mist
    poet of the week scribe on brutha love this
     
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    nice one poet...feeling you on this
    Peace
    BlueWater :heart:
     
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    I'm liking this one, Rasheed. This is one of the reasons you are poet of the week. Keep giving it to us, straight with no chaser.
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    AWWWW YEAH!!!!
    WOW
    :blob fire: :blob fire: :blob fire: :blob fire:
    Poet of the Week Powerful Piece/Peace :)
     
  7. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname, Thanks for the read and comment.

    RICH, Thanks Brother, Peace be unto you.

    Bluewater, Thanks.

    Leaky, It's great to just be and be honored and cheered, Peace.

    triniti, Thanks for the fuel.

    We with heads, Gittin it on.............................................................
    Peace and Blessings, YAWL
     
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