Black Poetry : Thoughts Of You

Hiclass_female

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Alabama
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computer operator
Constantly comparing others to you
my thoughts are hooked on you
wanting to be with you
but there's nothing I can do
I feel like I'm in a bottle of glue
stuck in one spot
I really like you alot
random conversations of you feeling the same way
maybe something will come of it one day
hopefully soon
B4 my day of doom
my time would have been a total waste
if I didn't get to hold you at my own pace
or see your face
or give you a taste
of my love that can't be erased
and can't be replaced
what is it going to take
for you to understand
I want you to be my man?
 
that's what i'm talkin about..sometimes you just gotta come straight up with it, don't you? hard-headed knuckleheadz that we men be, can't see the truth despite the many hints...i like the way you expressed that frustration with this piece..the emotion really came through, which speaks to your communicating ability as well as the skill to get your point across in a way that isn't overbearing.
 

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