Black Poetry : "Thoughts of You"

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  1. Nappy_thoughts

    Nappy_thoughts Member MEMBER

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    I dreamed last night
    That you and I were …..One
    In hindsight I see you in another light
    Filled with the Son
    You and He be one
    Biblical …”Flesh of Your Flesh”
    Head on my chest
    I rest in You
    Easy…The wind blows
    And there goes…my heart
    I yearn to be apart of you
    Forever
    And
    Never…..do I want leave to this state of
    Mind..
    In
    Mines…….
    I find time to draw lines
    That turn into hearts…..that
    Starts electricity to run through my veins
    Tattooing you last name at the end of mine…..(to be continued)

    C.T.S 2003
     
  2. Khasm13

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    flesh of your flesh
    leaves me breathless
    like lungs constricted
    when inflicted
    by your sweet poison
    that starts all the noise in
    my head to go off all at once
    seconds feel like months
    months feel like decades
    inside your embrace
    a maze
    each new corridor
    sets my heart ablaze
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the poetic feel to this.
    Oh so nice... I see a tyte colab
    in process... Do the thang.
    Peace to ya.
     
  4. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to read you again!!

    Spiritual Godly love shared in His name...THIS
    is what it's all about and if it's in His Will, you will have is last name sis!!!
    look forward to the continuation.:cool:
     
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