Black Poetry : Thoughts of why

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking upon a star
    Tears fall……the pain
    overwhelming
    Where did it go wrong
    Why are we at this stage
    Things was good
    Things were the best..
    Then I woke up one morning
    And the love was gone
    But seems as if a piece
    could be left
    The conversation gone
    Like a sad love song
    That never ends…..
    Where did it go
    How did it happen
    Lost in the wonders of this world
    Not fully understanding
    Cant even begin to deal…
    Madness of love
    Twist and eats away
    and goes so deep…
    driving you crazy
    like almost being close to
    death but being alive
    as it takes you through the
    different stages..
    killin you slowly….
    Why cant you love me unclearly
    And not try to define me
    us or we
    love free and
    just love me as I am
    as i love you
    Storms of clouds cover
    what once was…
    and I don’t understand no more
    lost in the haze of it all
    like following a maze….
    And cant seem to break through
    Looking upon a star
    Tears fall……the pain
    overwhelming
    see I cant deny my love
    and I cant take the pain
    so why do you deny it
    this is what i woke up to
    once feelin complete
    now incomplete without your love
    holding me tight
    protecting…..me
    how do we get it back
    confused in a lost world
    hittin my head against
    the wall nothing makes sense
    anymore
    cant move forward
    without goin backwards
    we cant move on until
    you drop the past
    see my past is you
    my present is you
    and….
    My future was you…
    and still is you
    And you seem to don’t get it….
    your my everything.... :cry:
    :sand:


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  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Feeling you here!
    So sad and beautiful! All
    wrapped up in one!
    love your dropped!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tyte peice, i enjoyed it,
    :heart:
    -story
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank yall for the love and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt soon and very soon !
    weep not forth the love is within
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm very beautiful angel. I'm loving it.
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would I be corny to say that your words were angelic?
    Well they were very beautiful and I feel this peice.
     
  8. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY NICE DROP SISTA ANGEL!!!! well felt!!!!
    MUCH LOVE!!!!!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons..as always your support and love given thanks sis

    the_story..thanks glad you enjoyed it

    $$RICH$$..in time i guess within is thy love
    thanks for all your loving support my brother

    Dior Robynsonne...hmmmmm thank you my brother

    thatgirl74...lol naw its not corny thank you for your comment and support

    turtle1 turtle!! turtle!! turtle!! :lol: thanks for ya support and love
    poet of the week...hey now

    Peace Yall
    Angel
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl! this was such a tight piece! wow!
    I agree with purplemoons! this is so sad yet beautiful....really enjoyed this msblk:)
     
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