Black Poetry : Thoughts of a h0e

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it just me or did I go wrong somewhere?
    I'm spaced somewhere
    out there
    And I fear
    That if I ain't here
    What makes this love really sincere?
    Is it the mere
    Fact that I don't give a care
    Who I'm wit I still take them there
    This biz is a low gear
    But hey it does pay my light, gas, and bus fare
    While I'm gyratin' my @ss bare
    It's not like I'm havin' a love affair
    Cause when they lickin' their tongue and **** I ain't even there

    I've gotten used to the moaning stuff now
    And I how
    I should lick and suck the foul
    While I bow
    The substance of beer and booze is how
    I usually make it through the here and now
    The now
    The now
    What is now?
    The now is NOT how
    I live my life.....wow
    Cause.......I'm not even here now

    See, all they see is the body
    The tits, and the clothes on me
    They don't see the sadness and cryin' that moves me
    Cause they only tryin' to get IN me
    And after they done they don't even listen to me
    They only fall asleep on top of me
    They never realize I am a lady
    Cause they only cum when they want and how they want quickly
    While they freak me
    It really sickens me
    Shoutin' " Baby!!! Baby!!!!!!!!!!"
    As they pump me hardy
    But I guess that what you get being a h0e to somebody eles's baby

    But shoot I figure
    They must not be handling it right.....my body's more mature
    I have virture
    And the literature
    That can bring any freak creature
    The way they want and better
    I CAN handle that dig-a-ling better than any heifer
    Because unlike those broads I know how to handle my figure
    I have the huf and the puf for any n****r
    Can you picture
    me or rather
    Can I take your fanasties there?

    Mama always said that I would make something of myself
    Just before she molested me and took me for herself
    Well, I guess I did cause she taught me to love everyone else
    But myself
    Until I had nothing but my body left
    So, I GIVE and TAKE as much I want even though it fools with my health
    I am makin' a lot of wealth
    I've taking everything from thugs to the wanna be Mac Beth's
    But you know I have to have my meth....
    Where would I be without that filth?
    I have a gift
    I'm a h0e of all wealth

    I've seen jealous gurls look me up and down all the time
    I remember in middle school I used to get into fights all the time
    Because I took other broad's men and designated them as mine
    I really showed my behind
    While I showed them kind
    I was freakin' their best friends behind
    Their backs that were fine
    I didn't waste no time
    I had found my sign
    My scandalous ways were so devine
    And they were ALL mine

    But the time I was nine teen I had taken every boy in the hood again and again
    I didn't want those anymore so I moved on to better things
    I gave and gave my mama minks and things
    She was happy as long as I gave her rings and things

    At twenty my ways had caught up with me
    Some man I can't think of which one gave AIDS to me
    Now, I can't even make a family
    Let alone have a baby
    Still, I WON'T stop, CAN'T stop......I have to please every man lovely
    Even with AIDS they still can't stop pumpin' me
    So, I continue this journey until that man that gave this to me
    Reeps what he sows and dies by the hands of me
    Someday, I'll be here again........
    But for now I'm off to take on my sexual journey
    Will you take care of me?
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can someone say good read?lol. whoa, this was deep down to the core, n sad at the same time.unfortunately alot of women know this feeling all to well.u cant love someone till u love urself.great flow.im still in awe. much love :)
     
  3. Antar

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    when you got me into you
    i kept my intentions true
    this weight on my chest
    not to stress
    just suggest i feel/felt
    the reciprical of what you go/went
    thru
    our present presence may apply much pressure
    on what others think
    still along with this
    "i can do betta than this"
    that you feel
    your growth is true n real
    it shows from your mind to your
    words
    it's much absurd
    for one to think you're no more than
    curves

    one-love sis,
    don't let negative issues trap you
    keep findin your piece of mine
    you'll be able to resolve issues you see
    in tyme..

    one
    /antar
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well heard this was awesome
    watch da N word !
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam....sorry about that Rich....it just sounded so right at the tyme in the flow that I had to leave it the same.....thanks for feelin' it though
     
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    very cool sistah, i love this one....keep it flowin
     
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    I like that it was a piece that makes u feel for the "narrator". Good flow.
     
  8. Khasm13

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    nice joint...
    keep em come'n
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

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    wow...loved it girl...
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya'll.....thanks for feelin' this
     
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