Quiet Poetry Lounge : Thoughts of A Black Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShyOne617, Sep 29, 2003.

  1. ShyOne617

    ShyOne617 New Member MEMBER

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    Your silhouette glides though my mind
    Constant, free rein, wreaking havoc, confusion, can't think straight
    Fine specimen of a black man
    Tall, dark chocolate, mere perfection

    Your silhouette glides though my mind
    Constant, free rein, wreaking havoc, confusion, can't think straight
    Your aura leaves me weak at the knees
    Breathless, in awe, heart fluttering

    Your silhouette glides though my mind
    Constant, free rein, wreaking havoc, confusion, can't think straight
    Let it be know you are the supreme ruler of my world
    Keeper of my heart, mind, body and soul
    You win, I BOW DOWN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    wow!!!!!
    welcome to destee.com quiet poetry flow
    love the display u show
    welcome to the family of peace & bond
    happy u here to share the power of ya heart
    this was very tyte scribing welcome:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcomeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    :wave: :wave::wave::wave:
    hi there shyone...
    you sho dont sound shy :)lol
     
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    Bless,
    Tyte piece. Welcome
     
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    very beautiful...i loved this
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm new to this forum. I really like the flow of this poem. I felt as though the words came to you easily. Very nice.
     
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    hey ShyOne617:wave: welcome
    this is indeed
    a very nice flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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