Black Poetry : thoughts in motions....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 28, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *one of my rambling poems thoughts wont stand still*

    Some people run at the first sign
    Of stormy weather
    Wondering if I am one…..
    Alone in this race
    Walkin at a steady pace
    Holding on…….
    To build my life
    As I suffer and strive

    For the path don’t look clear
    But you seem to bare
    As you still try to walk that road
    Here comes that fold
    Carrying on is all you know how to do
    So much life ahead
    So much to do as the day runs low
    You begin to build once more
    Keep falling but seem to get back up
    No matter how hard it gets you have to try….
    Cant give up yet……
    Running in the storm unable to turn back
    Knowing your going to make it
    Won’t let go for you have walk to far
    Within thy wind turning
    About and confuse
    Some people run at the first sign
    Of stormy weather

    Wondering if I am one…..
    Holding on to a dream
    That seems so far out of reach…
    As the storm pour
    I still keep on keeping…
    Wondering if I stop
    Where would I be……

    If we don’t help ourselves
    No one else will…you push and pull
    Do a 9-5 and go to school
    Still it aint enough
    But you keep working
    Towards that one goal
    To live…..
    But it aint over
    Because you
    Aint finish yet….
    So as you walk that storm you
    Come alive and build
    And rise
    But….
    Some people run at the first sign
    Of stormy weather

    (C)2004
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh angel heart...
    The storm can be a beautiful thing, because like you...you weather the storm, which makes you stronger and wiser and more vibrant for life. Just the fact that you're wandering through this storm let's us know that you're always moving FORWARD...regardless of the storm. This piece says more than you know...it's very good.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd this open up like da river
    u can withstand the storms coz da heart is
    full of grace
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and support queentswana

    Rich...thank you very much...much love to you :wink:
     
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    feelin this

    Hey MBA
    once again droppin a tyte flow
    i feel u on this
    feel the same way gotta keep ya
    head up and keep strivin
    we will get there fa sho
    Shalom Yahsistah
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eeek: Doing the dag thing I see.......... :jawdrop:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Yah for the love on dis

    CP i guess so doing the dang thang...thank you for the support and love my brother....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Some run away....and seem to run away. Ask why....

    Very nice.... :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    Very tyte drop sis!
    The Angel has spreaded her wings!
    loving it!
     
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