Black Poetry : Thoughts 2 Words

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thoughts 2 Words

    Brown and smooth
    skin like butter
    Complexion honey coated
    like none other.

    Sister, Dam!
    Do I need to discover?

    Your Niles
    Your Rivers
    Your Valleys
    Your pastures

    To hear your laughter
    That's what I'm after

    Just to soothe you
    Or move you.
    You are the song to my soul
    That I need to groove to!

    With these thoughts
    to my words.
    Combine'n adjatives
    to verbs.

    Your pro's
    to my nouns.
    On this beautiful planet
    Is where you were found.

    You see this man knew
    a real woman when he saw her.
    So if he ever saw her falling
    He would never let anything scar her!

    Your true Brother to the Night.
    So spread your wings "Angel"
    and prepare to take flight.

    Like the rebirth of soul
    but this is not anything new.
    IM in Maryland but you know
    how us "Philly" cats do!

    But back to you scrap
    I feel it's best that I map.
    What direction this relationship
    needs to be at.

    I have felt no joy in the time
    that has been spent apart.
    Just emptiness while missing
    that joy in my heart.

    So Is the flame dead
    or can we rekindle the spark?
    I love you Princess
    With all my heart!

    Copyright 10/04/2002 by Caramelpython
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was str8 butta smooth loved da flow here
    keep flowin bruh !
     
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    this was str8
    like da flow....
    i see yo pen din got hot...
    flow on...my brother..:angel1:
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You!

    I thank you 2 for the words of kindness 2 my drip.
     
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    this was smooth:)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome..
    i always loved how ya flow..
     
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    Your true Brother to the Night....

    this was
    Brown and smooth
    like butter
    honey coated
    and like none other.


    love the way you dropped this :bomb:
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ola Thank You , I'm feeling your vibe also

    Mzblkangel you know that you always do it up on this spot

    SwtT...TY

    agelicsage...Hope I can drop more 4 u soon
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heyyyyyyy Python i remeba this one....:)
    this was tight and ummm hmmmm
    i love this scribe..... :kiss:



    trust this was hot
    so i had to bring it back.... :kiss:

    ps...by fav parts are in bold..... :grouphug:
     
  10. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im glad u brought this around again..... enjoyed readin it .. much love
     
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