Black Poetry : thoughts….

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sittin here rememberin this day
    9/11 just 5 days after
    my day…..look at it now it was
    really nothing of…..
    over come
    that this world could be
    destroy just by a blink of
    and eye….

    Now this
    No poetry just a
    Flow from head to my soul
    Though my pen…

    I was at work
    Had to go get my kids..
    There school was a target in
    A small little town..
    they closed it all
    down...
    from schools to
    courts ....
    highways...
    and streets
    oh my....

    Drove as I never could
    Traffic jam
    For all was thinking
    Like me…
    Panic and worry
    We all got family…

    That maybe in the wrong place
    At the wrong time….

    For this did touch me
    as it did others
    My mother was safe
    And my family ok..
    But they lost friends
    That where close…
    Never say never
    Because you
    Never know what
    The next minute
    Or day hold…

    But it touch me
    In my soul
    And pride of my country
    It took my breathin
    Heart race…
    And pressure went up…

    How could this happen…
    What did we do?
    We are the free we help others
    In return we get
    Punish for
    Crimes we
    as a people
    did
    not
    Do…

    O my
    Oh my
    O my…

    Just pray that’s
    All we can do…
    Just pray
    For a better tomorrow
    But never forget
    At a blink of an eye
    It can all come down….

    Thank you for reading my thoughts….

    blackangel thought!!!!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and beautiful thoughts they were...how touching to actually hear from someone who knows people that lost someone...this is just touching.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i didnt know them but my peeps did just
    all the same it hurt
    thanks for reading and postin ur thoughts
     
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