Black Poetry : thought that i*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crooked eyes
    slanted at the
    way i go about my daily living--

    stares cutting gashes imaginary in flesh
    no blood externally but sean
    see mental scars

    incised...

    those who talk don't know me--
    they just know about me--
    and judge as if they were the being--
    supreme

    but they aren't.

    pupils out of the sides of eyes wells--
    watching me and my every move
    rooting for my slip-ups
    downfalls
    and ruts of mediocrity--

    i thought that i*
    might just let those know--

    i see you watching...

    i will
    disappoint you.

    sometimecrookedeyesandsharplookshelponetoleadstraightandnarrowlives

    thepoetsean
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin' ya motion

    ya working dem wordz i see like .....beautifully done !!:)
     
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    sherykah, and flyght man $$RICHNE$$

    i could never thank you both enough for reading and enjoying my words.

    thass a bet

    sean
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    On point poet.

    Love the flo on this all the way to the end.
    Thanksfortheread.:D
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1nce again

    thanks for stoppin thru and read what i had to say

    fo sho.


    sean
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