Quiet Poetry Lounge : thought i'd let you know.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jun 12, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the middle of a thought now baby--

    i
    seem
    to
    think
    of
    only
    u

    the

    pitch of your heaven excites me--
    i've been....

    literally running from telling you this--
    from fear that you might become distant--
    and might not feel the same--

    but

    i
    think u are


    my greatest connection to the most high--
    my
    apple in my eye
    my
    constant thought of mine
    my
    reason i strive to shine
    my
    close-yet-so-distant
    sweet-slice-of-life's-greater-joy


    u are
    so sweet and
    lov-eh-lee

    (voice trembling)

    just thought
    i'd
    let
    u

    k n o w.


    (sean)
     
  2. blackstar

    blackstar Member MEMBER

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    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss::kiss:
    :kiss:
    :kiss: since when? all your work is beautiful
    but when u writin' bout me it sounds
    even sweeter :) u are a real sweetheart ;)
    and since when did u know about
    my pitch of heaven?;)
    :kiss:
    :kiss:
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummmmmm!

    ThePoetSean, your name is tailored fit. You wear it with style and confidence. Very nice poetry. The paper must sway to the rhythum of your pen and shake from your electrifying thoughts......Coco
     
  4. Destee

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    awwwwww :love: this is sooo sweet

    and look at Blackstar using up all dem :kiss: :kiss:

    Lawd Lawd Lawd

    romance is in the air
    very nice ThePoetSean!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you all enjoyed the poem!

    guess i conveyed my message...

    destee
    coco
    and black*

    thanks for the read.


    sean;)
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sittin' here with moms...

    ...letting her read some of your work (I told her you were one of my favorites, and she said she doesn't blame me). I doubt, very seriously, that anyone else could, either. Hot piece, pa...:hot::hot::hot::hot::hot:
     
  7. shaneak

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    Nice flow and now they know...Good luck!!!
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean, this heyah is just a lovely piece.

    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~ :eek: :eek: :eek:
     
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