Black Poetry : Thought Entry #2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, May 7, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What if the birds didn't sing?
    Would the trees be able to get
    their dance on in the morning?
    And what would put them to sleep at night?
    Have you ever thought you were dreaming,
    Your troubles were your nightmares
    or
    Could it be reality?
    You say to yourself with your eyes closed.
    "This could not be happening.
    This whole day or life
    is just a bad dream.
    Im going to wake any minute now."
    You feel trapped in a supposed dream,
    with no reach for comfort or no way out.
    You wouldn't think that life
    could be so cruel and mean!!!:kiss:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice.......love the words....

    ~lovely~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yet inside every dream
    is a comfort yet to be seen
    yes as da day pass of
    such day long & mean
    quietly fall to sleep
    for a peaceful dream
    awaken to a new day

    love this flow keep droppin' ink
     
  4. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed so nice. Especially the opening. I never even thought that the trees could be dancing to the bird song. Sounds nuts when I repeat it, but to me that's a hellava concept.
     
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