Black Poetry : Those Eyes.

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through my Strawberry Daquiri induced haze.
    I hear the sweetest voice call my name.
    With kisses trailing from kneck to waist
    I find myself bought awake.
    I look into the brownest eyes
    and realize these eyes are always
    locked with mine morning after
    morning
    night after night.
    These eyes seem to always set things
    right.
    These eyes have always found a way
    to awaken in me.
    Fires of lust and flames
    of desire.
    In these eyes I find my
    future and past
    and I am so glad we
    made it last.
    I close my eyes with
    a smile on my face.
    So happy to be in this
    place.
    So peaceful and sweet and
    so sublime.
    And happy to look again into
    those eyes.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very endearing and sweet. Looks like you have found the perfect set of eyes...very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful eye i felt dis sweet release
     
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    We see those eyes too...
    through your words...

    Very nice sister...Very nice
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all so much for the feedback.
     
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