Black Poetry : THOSE 3 WORDS...

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The roses were ever so beautiful
    The godiva chocolates were tasty and sweet
    The diamond bracelet had a sparkle
    you could see from across the street

    Some may say I’m crazy
    I should be happy as can be
    I guess would
    if today was more
    than about receiving Gifts
    it means way more than that to me

    We should celebrate and show our love
    Each and every day we breathe
    Although I love all of my gifts
    I would give them all back
    if only he would say
    those 3 words to me

    He always shows me in his actions
    he loves so intimate and passionately
    I honestly believe
    The man would do
    anything in the world for me

    And even though I can feel it
    In his loving touch and taste in his tender kiss
    Those 3 words I’ve never heard
    Never have they come from his lips

    Even when I say them to him
    he says “me too” or “you know I do”
    What does he think is going to happen
    If he voices how he feels too
    Does he think it’s some kind of taboo

    Maybe I’m just trippn’
    Analyzing things way to closely
    I know diamonds are a girl’s bestfriend
    The Godiva Chocolate was heavenly
    I love the way fresh flowers smell
    And they look so beautiful and velvety
    But all I really wanted was
    Those 3 words said to me

    I called to thank my sweetie
    For the wonderful gifts
    He gave to me
    I was about to hang up the phone
    When my ears heard something so lovely
    “Baby I’m happy you loved your gifts
    You know I would do anything for you
    I know I have never said it before but “
    :hearts2: I LOVE YOU:hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...the love in this piece just make we wanna u know !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about a heart melting. Gifts are wonderful, but to hear those 3 words, whew, there's nothing else quite like it. I loved this.
     
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