Black Haiku : This We Can Do

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 11, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seekers of mercy
    We are not perfect
    But our love we have down pat

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    seek of loving whole
    maketh da perfectional
    heart as two lovers.....

    BE.....ya heart is on beat wit so much love u flow on bru !
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Haiku, though I must confess that my love ain't totally as strong and concise as I'd like it to be. But I is gettin' there...sho is ni.

    Keep em comin'...Joyce
     
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    keepers of these hearts
    there's so much more we will share
    LOVE will be our guide

    thank you for your continued inspiration BE. :)

    a
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep working at it Joyce....A worthy effort with incredible results for sure.
    Rich Alyce...ya'll from the old days forever inspiring me.
     
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    indeed my brutha
    from da days of yeasteryear
    unto ya scribe greatness