Quiet Poetry Lounge : This Touch (revisited)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by JAD68, Jan 24, 2002.

  1. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pulse quickens… at my touch
    synchronizing the beat of our hearts
    in a deafening rhythm… of silent Eros
    lustful wants are lost to passionate needs
    intertwined, we become… in mind, body and soul
    as the darkness of fear gives birth to the light of ecstasy

    The cup of love pours slowly… and I taste you
    warm and sweet is this elixir
    an intoxicating potion… of your essence
    insatiably, I drink, only to yearn for more
    in supplication… I kneel
    at the altar of spiritual union

    Incense, oils and honey… for purification
    the prelude to an exotic journey
    unlocking the door… to your sanctuary
    entering into the nocturnal sunshine
    engulfed am I… in passion’s fire
    Intimacy bathes us in its flames.

    In this exchange of spirits… we climax
    building upon a foundation of bliss
    heightening… every sensation of being
    until it can no longer be contained
    this touch… everlasting
    Etched into my mind, by you, my love.



    Poem by:
    James A. Davis, Jr.
    (C) October 23, 2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again i say

    ya flow is tyght and glides through da mind of essence:)
     
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    ****...

    i'm not usually into love/sensual pieces but ****, this was off the hook...your weaved together vivid imagerial words to create a fabric so silk it floated past my eyes...very nice piece...fah real...
     
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    bravo! bravo! bravo!

    ...this was sensuality personified Poet!!
    kinda makes you say "mmmmmmm..."
    cause it tasted to so good! know what i
    mean?? :D

    i lovedid it!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  5. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just bringin' back a lil' sumn' to rekindle the fire...
     
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    i like i like....
    nice my brother
     
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    love it love it love it, is all i can say LOL
     
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    Someone is very lucky indeed..... Very nice.
     
  9. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am humbled by the love... thank you all
     
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    that was so beautiful! i was there! do your thing man!
     
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