Black Poetry : This Time Does It Hurt

poeticdelight

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does it hurt
to hear me laughing
but not see me smile

does it hurt
not being near me
far away over a mile

does it hurt
what you are thinking
thoughts of love
throughout the year

does it hurt
without my presence
soothing your soul in
solemn cheer

does it hurt
to feel the essence
still storming through
your mind

does it hurt
to come and realize
that love is hard to
find wasting your time

does it hurt
this time.................................................



lana1287 productions :love:
 
Queen pd

yeap!
it hurt dis tyme
coz inside u so fine

it hurts coz we can't wine & dine

it hurts dis tyme round
coz theirs no better love found

poeticly bliss sho i miss
and it hurts dis tyme round
now we bound afar many miles
i feel u laughing yet i see no smiles
it hurts...........

sistah PD u slap dis one on right gurl!!
couldn't help myself..:rolleyes:
 
thanx Richy Rich and Madd

when i wrote this:


i wanted the reader to understand
its two underlying meanings

love can hurt only when it's real
(in other words, real love hurts)

falling in and out of love which is not
exactly real love can hurt as well
(in other words, the quest for love hurts)

the pain of not being able to kinect with
someone versus the pain of not finding
that special someone to kinect with............

you know the saying:

once you've found that special someone
there is no great gain-you may have been
able to find what you're looking for yet what is
it worth if you can't spend quality time
with that person vice versa

pd :)

peace
 

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