Black Poetry : This Time Does It Hurt

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    does it hurt
    to hear me laughing
    but not see me smile

    does it hurt
    not being near me
    far away over a mile

    does it hurt
    what you are thinking
    thoughts of love
    throughout the year

    does it hurt
    without my presence
    soothing your soul in
    solemn cheer

    does it hurt
    to feel the essence
    still storming through
    your mind

    does it hurt
    to come and realize
    that love is hard to
    find wasting your time

    does it hurt
    this time.................................................



    lana1287 productions :love:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Queen pd

    yeap!
    it hurt dis tyme
    coz inside u so fine

    it hurts coz we can't wine & dine

    it hurts dis tyme round
    coz theirs no better love found

    poeticly bliss sho i miss
    and it hurts dis tyme round
    now we bound afar many miles
    i feel u laughing yet i see no smiles
    it hurts...........

    sistah PD u slap dis one on right gurl!!
    couldn't help myself..:rolleyes:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVING THIS KINDA SINCERE FOR REAL DOES IT HURT
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx Richy Rich and Madd

    when i wrote this:


    i wanted the reader to understand
    its two underlying meanings

    love can hurt only when it's real
    (in other words, real love hurts)

    falling in and out of love which is not
    exactly real love can hurt as well
    (in other words, the quest for love hurts)

    the pain of not being able to kinect with
    someone versus the pain of not finding
    that special someone to kinect with............

    you know the saying:

    once you've found that special someone
    there is no great gain-you may have been
    able to find what you're looking for yet what is
    it worth if you can't spend quality time
    with that person vice versa

    pd :)

    peace
     
  5. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh, I'm so feeling you

    sista Poeticdelight! guuurrrrrrrrrrrrl!

    :heart:

    SWT
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    it's comes from the heart

    thank you Shadee Lady :)

    pd
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    who are you, the love therapist or sumpin'??? :wink:

    you're kickin' it hard.

    p.s-

    yo i just peeped those out!!!
    gotta hit ya' back.
     
  8. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic....

    A very nice piece....
    thanks for sharing

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    epiphany thanks for the read

    you know i always enjoy your visit

    pd :)
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    jah

    i'm just telling like it is that's all

    being informative in this piece

    p.s-

    i forgot all about that :lol:

    ever since i started taking pics for
    my class projects i've gotten creative

    peacenlove
     
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