Black Poetry : This Thing!

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What we do is this thing
    That takes us through these
    Motions and brings us back to
    The same place.
    We seem to walk away hell bent on not repeating the same thing and the path we are storming down seems to lead us right back to the same point.
    Here. Now. This. You. I.
    And no matter how much I can intellectualize the fact I can't continue this cycle because it is just as productive as a dog chasing his own tail. I can't get off this ride because the ride is so **** good.
    So here I am taking part in this Thing that we do and we do it oh so well. And right now I can't stop.
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa,




    ... Good script poetess, powerfully written, glad to see you back and posting thatgirl74.

    Hopefully, some will break the habit:



    Peace In,




     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Clyde thank you for the Love! Glad you liked it. Feels good to be back.
     
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    sounds like it's a good thing Sister! :toast:

    don't stop ... till you get enuff! ... :love:

    Great Write!

    Good to have you back in the house!

    Love You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Thanks Sis!!! It's Good to be back!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in motion sometime we get all caught up in the moment that keeps us there
     
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    Yes So true! Like your held captive.
     
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