Black Poetry : This Thing Between Us

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whatever THIS is between us i dont want it to end.
    Never have i smiled so much...
    My heart flutters at the thought of your touch.
    I dream of my poetry making love to your guitar.
    Never did i think that things would go this far.
    You are something beautiful...pure bliss.
    I feel something instrumental when we kiss.

    Oh how i'd love to lay in your arms
    and listen to you sing sweet tunes in my ear.
    The thought of never feeling you again brings a tear.
    THIS thing that we have i fear.

    "you had me at hello."
    cheesy i know,
    but THIS thing that we have..i want it to grow.

    You and I together could sell out a show..
    Your guitar and our love notes:heart:.
    Whatever THIS is between us it's special.

    Even if just for a minute, or an hour, or a day...week..month..or year,
    I'll always remember the feeling that you left inside of here :heart:.
     
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    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He better be good, too....Love this piece.
     
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    Sister Poet Guttapoetfromny,

    Beautiful! I felt this piece through and through. There is just something so sensual about a man and his guitar. Love this piece. Thank you for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    I'm soo feeling You! Emotional enlightenment:)
     
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    whatever it is between the two
    that makes such notes stick like glue
    and make ya heart flood wit truth
    is indeed a treasure......love the flow !

    I know it's all good to ya !!!!!
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everybody glad you enjoyed!
     
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