Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 23, 2001.
(c) SunshyneOyrgynals 2001, all rights reserved
stop wondering WHY...
when all i've
ever wanted was to be
with you...to hold you
near and dear
to the whole of me
it was meant to be
you holding me
me holding you
when the time finally arrive
and we truly share our lives
it will be as it should
feels so good
i'll be waiting.
we ring around
in the heart
GA, i like this piece for it addresses the thoughts of true love. love is best when you didn't see it coming...
You be flowin'...
...incessantly, and like no other, sis. This one, I can, definitely, relate to (what girl can't?). You just never cease to amaze ya lil sis, droppin' all this heat...
*Heatedly, takin' those notes*...
once again i must say...WHOA.
why must thou tortureth thee with--
such infernesturous phrases--
sunshyne shalt forever spitteth flames--
from the belly of her being--
causing fire in my soul...
Suhshyne ya flow is
tyght fah sho!!!!
feelin it sis...feelin it!!!
here I was, getting semi-involved with folks I KNOW don't feel me....don't know WHAT I'd do if someone returned my 'favors'!
You Guys Are So Beautiful To Me!!
once again... i am overwhelmed by the love!!
Baller & Raheem- thanks for scribin' for me!
D- you jus plain ole' silly! bit i agree witcha!
Afri & Maple- you are PRICELESS!
Ms A- CONSTANTLY... in prayer! (believe dat)
Seany- ... witheverypoeticbreathipossess...
B- thanks for the read... explain your reply?
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