Black Poetry : ...this thing between us.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 23, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4
    (c) SunshyneOyrgynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    stop wondering WHY...

    when all i've
    ever wanted was to be
    with you...to hold you
    near and dear
    to the whole of me
    maybe
    it was meant to be
    you holding me
    me holding you
    and maybe
    when the time finally arrive
    and we truly share our lives
    it will be as it should
    US
    feels so good
    but
    for now
    i'll be waiting.
     
  3. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2001
    Messages:
    52
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    ms. shyne

    we ring around
    rhetorical
    questions
    forever
    wondering
    whether
    we
    already
    know
    the answers
    neither
    one
    wishing
    for this
    to end
    in the heart
    of us
    hoping
    for
    best-case
    scenario

    'friends'

    :heart:

    r
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,053
    Likes Received:
    13
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Teacher of English, Literature & Poetry
    Location:
    Baltimore, Md.
    Ratings:
    +15
    now
    why
    is
    everybody
    writing
    down
    the
    s
    i
    d
    e
    of
    the
    page
    like
    this? :D

    GA, i like this piece for it addresses the thoughts of true love. love is best when you didn't see it coming...

    love it...
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 27, 2001
    Messages:
    481
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Connecticut
    Ratings:
    +0
    You be flowin'...

    ...incessantly, and like no other, sis. This one, I can, definitely, relate to (what girl can't?). You just never cease to amaze ya lil sis, droppin' all this heat... :hot::hot::hot:
    *Heatedly, takin' those notes*... :D
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    once again i must say...WHOA.

    why must thou tortureth thee with--
    such infernesturous phrases--
    sunshyne shalt forever spitteth flames--
    from the belly of her being--
    causing fire in my soul...

    *doyathang

    1.ichi.one.won

    wurdplai.
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    1,154
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    African Dance Instructor/Cultural Educator
    Location:
    Buffalo
    Ratings:
    +0
    [email protected]!!!!!!!

    Suhshyne ya flow is
    tyght fah sho!!!!:)

    feelin it sis...feelin it!!!
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    Ms. GA

    pray! :)


    a
     
  9. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 7, 2001
    Messages:
    66
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    teehee

    feelin ya....

    here I was, getting semi-involved with folks I KNOW don't feel me....don't know WHAT I'd do if someone returned my 'favors'! :D

    feelin ya

    teehee

    b
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4
    You Guys Are So Beautiful To Me!!

    once again... i am overwhelmed by the love!! :)

    Baller & Raheem- thanks for scribin' for me!
    D- you jus plain ole' silly! bit i agree witcha!
    Afri & Maple- you are PRICELESS!
    Ms A- CONSTANTLY... in prayer! (believe dat)
    Seany- :)... witheverypoeticbreathipossess...
    B- thanks for the read... explain your reply?
     
Loading...